This is one of my first attempts at flash fiction, something my sister taught me to do. I do one every few weeks on my blog. It keeps the juices flowing (especially when I'm in the middle of a revision). I hope everyone enjoys! And come visit me on my blog to read more f.f's!
It's amazing that you have such time in your busy life to take time to type this up and put it up. I absolutely loved it! The concept is amazing and if you were ever to expand it, I would gladly continue to read it!
Wow. This was amazing. Seriously. I love the concept, I love your execution, I love the detail you've put into it.
Probably the only quibble I have is the beginning. It felt very rushed and your first paragraph didn't really have the pull that I usually look for in the beginning of a piece. Maybe try smoothing that out and making it a bit more engaging.
Comments(2)
about 1 year ago Aisley Scott said:
I love this! The concept was really unique, and I'm glad a real, honest-to-god author like you has time to be a normal Figgie :)
over 1 year ago Jennifer + the Machine said:
It's amazing that you have such time in your busy life to take time to type this up and put it up. I absolutely loved it! The concept is amazing and if you were ever to expand it, I would gladly continue to read it!
Reviews(2)
over 1 year ago The Dream Walker said:
Oh. My. Freakin. God! PLEEZ WRITE MORE!!!!
over 1 year ago Kyla Denae said:
Wow. This was amazing. Seriously. I love the concept, I love your execution, I love the detail you've put into it.
Probably the only quibble I have is the beginning. It felt very rushed and your first paragraph didn't really have the pull that I usually look for in the beginning of a piece. Maybe try smoothing that out and making it a bit more engaging.
Otherwise, this was awesome.