A Second

A Second

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My very first poem, which I wrote when I was nine (although I'll admit I have edited it a little since then), about time slipping away.




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over 5 years ago Gabby Paige said:

I really like your use of metaphors. It really captures how short a second really is and how we should cherish it. Great poem! Keep writing!


over 5 years ago Gabby said:

Wow!This is beautiful!It flows wonderfully!The imagery is amazing!Great job!Keep writing! :)


over 5 years ago Sav The Fish said:

This is so beautiful to me. Really. "A second is a little piece of forever", you had me right there. Your metaphors are exquisite. Your rhyme is very good. I just adore this piece. c:


over 5 years ago Theodora Dochara said:

This was amazingly well-written, and I loved the whole theme. : ) Great job!



almost 6 years ago Franchesca Bodnar said:

love it!LOVE IT!!! im so glad i read it! this is apsolutly beautiful!!!! fantastic! just fantastic!!!!! i could see the images ur were painting but then as soon as i had them they were gone-like a second. this is very well written, keep up the good work!