Out of Charm's Way

Out of Charm's Way

18 chapters / 14166 words

Approximately about 1 hour to read

Description:

(Last Updated: 1/8) About: Princess Sara must leave the palace. What's worse, she's without her family's beloved guard Theo. Now she has to journey so far with Kasen, a young, inexperienced guard. But maybe he's just what she needs. (NOTE: THIS STORY HAS BEEN TOTALLY REVAMPED, AS I AM RE-WRITING IT. THIS WOULD EXPLAIN WHY OLD COMMENTS NO LONGER MATCH UP TO THE STORY. JUST AN FYI.)

Genres:

Romance, Novel, Writing

Comments(12)

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over 4 years ago Angelina Montanari said:

I liked what I read ^-^ it was very good :D I liked how you included extra info (stuff) so we know whats going on :D Im sorry if that sounds confusing ^_^'. But I liked it, good job!

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over 4 years ago Sarah Spradlin said:

Awesome job!! I loved the backstory you gave and your title's ingenious. :D

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over 4 years ago c said:

Hearted! If you would like to swap please read/heart my story “Ella and Sam were here.” Thanks!

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over 5 years ago Jasper♬ said:

this is really good! The only thing I suggest is changing hotel to inn.

Reviews(2)

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about 1 month ago Havilahpengirl said:

I'am speachless....there are no words to describe how wanderful that story was. It was the best story i ahve ever read. Please write a squeal.

I give it five stars:*****

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over 6 years ago Azira Smith said:

I really like this story, but I feel like it could use more description.I can tell just by looking at the size of the paragraphs that they could stand to be fleshed out a little. Adding more details will help capture a reader's attention and really draw them into the story. That's all I can see that needs work, keep writing!