Boy with Plasma Running thru his Veins

Boy with Plasma Running thru his Veins

7 chapters / 7871 words

Approximately 39 minutes to read

Description:

24 year old Tay Zalle was a detective, a tough strong woman who knows how to handle a gun. When she is the witness to a murder of a young boy, her whole life is turned upside down. Join Tay on an adventure to catch a cold blooded killer.

Comments(11)

Buterflys

over 3 years ago Marcella Mason said:

love it

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over 3 years ago Zetta Mason said:

later, 2nd book

Buterflys

over 3 years ago Marcella Mason said:

wow thats reallly sad:( when will the evidence man come in????

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over 3 years ago Zetta Mason said:

yay i hoped so

Reviews(4)

Monocle

about 2 years ago Cam Proffitt said:

This is a really intriguing story, I could not stop reading and was disappointed when I found I couldn't read further. It needs some work, of course, there are quite a few grammatical and spelling errors and the flow of it is rather choppy, but you really kept me interested all throughout. Perhaps a bit more description mixed in with the dialogue and some more in-depth explanations would help some. I really look forward to seeing this finished.

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over 3 years ago Zetta Mason said:

marcella, u spelled Errors wrong... Smart... :)