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Approximately 39 minutes to read
24 year old Tay Zalle was a detective, a tough strong woman who knows how to handle a gun. When she is the witness to a murder of a young boy, her whole life is turned upside down. Join Tay on an adventure to catch a cold blooded killer.
almost 4 years ago Marcella Mason said:
almost 4 years ago Zetta Mason said:
later, 2nd book
wow thats reallly sad:(
when will the evidence man come in????
almost 5 years ago Zetta Mason said:
yay i hoped so
over 2 years ago Cam Proffitt said:
This is a really intriguing story, I could not stop reading and was disappointed when I found I couldn't read further. It needs some work, of course, there are quite a few grammatical and spelling errors and the flow of it is rather choppy, but you really kept me interested all throughout. Perhaps a bit more description mixed in with the dialogue and some more in-depth explanations would help some. I really look forward to seeing this finished.
marcella, u spelled Errors wrong... Smart... :)