I really don't think you have any idea how fantastically talented you are, Jenni. And one day I shall buy your first novel, and at the till I shall announce to the whole of Waterstone's: "THIS IS AN EXCEPTIONALLY EXCELLENT BOOK, AND I HAVEN'T EVEN READ IT YET. I JUST KNOW. BUY IT, PLEASE. THAT IS ALL."
I liked this. You had awesome imagery and details that really captured me as I read this. Even if it was a little short I loved the way you kept the reader drawn in throughout it and the ending didn't seem cheesy or anything. Nice job!
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7 months ago Rose Hollands said:
I really don't think you have any idea how fantastically talented you are, Jenni. And one day I shall buy your first novel, and at the till I shall announce to the whole of Waterstone's: "THIS IS AN EXCEPTIONALLY EXCELLENT BOOK, AND I HAVEN'T EVEN READ IT YET. I JUST KNOW. BUY IT, PLEASE. THAT IS ALL."
7 months ago Brenda Shell said:
Wow. That was really unexpected. A very well written piece.
7 months ago Stephanie Lynn Marasco said:
I liked this. You had awesome imagery and details that really captured me as I read this. Even if it was a little short I loved the way you kept the reader drawn in throughout it and the ending didn't seem cheesy or anything. Nice job!
7 months ago Abbey Huls said:
I thought Leslie was a girl at first I like how he acctually wasnt
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7 months ago Lauren F. said:
Wow. This was fantastic. Your writing style is true to heart and the ending line was amazing.
You did brilliantly with this.
-Laur
7 months ago Monique van den Berg said:
Spectacular! Your skills are not going to waste... Never a dull moment it was really good. Never stop writing, the world needs good authors...