No Control

No Control

1 chapter / 1181 words

Approximately 6 minutes to read

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©2012 tvdtsc contest finalist! Once the wolf takes over, there's no controlling it...

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Paris

over 5 years ago Emily Drew said:

captivating. :)

Chenier

over 5 years ago Aston Martin said:

Mhmkay, not what i was expecting. That ws really....intense. it actually caught me by suprise. At first i was like awwwww, until i realized that this ws nothing like jacob black lol. Good job.

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over 5 years ago Levi Chesher said:

Sweet. Love it. Would you mind reading quietus interruptus?

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over 5 years ago Sarah Brown said:

This was sooooo amazing! I'm just sitting here, absolutely in love with this story. Geez XD Wonderful(:

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over 5 years ago Madelyn Neal said:

Really really good! I was so sad yet I somehow knew it was coming. I owuld love to have a version where maybe she only maimed him or something :P really good and thanks for the swap!

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over 5 years ago Brittany Nicole said:

This will probably be long so I'm putting it in a review:

WHOA! That was my first reaction. I wasn't expecting this to be that intense, but I loved it! My favorite part was your use of description and words. (Especially the word apex.) It made me feel like I was turning into the wolf myself. I actually touched my spine and legs and such when you were describing them breaking to make sure mine weren't also...and the end...it made shudder, but I like how it was dramatic and not a normal "happily ever after ending". Everything was awesome! Good job! :D