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A victim is determined to get her vengeance.
almost 5 years ago Lexi-Lu said:
That was cool...
almost 5 years ago ariana sexton-hughes said:
good work. the twist is nice. good rhythm.... powerful
almost 5 years ago Katie Darrow said:
This is incredible. All of your writing is incredible. It flows soooo well, and the rhymes come easily. Keep writing!
almost 5 years ago Sara Thorne said:
Sweet, simple, powerful. Clear imagery, great rhythm, simple message. Good job.
about 5 years ago Connie X. said:
Wow what a great poem! I really loved your use of meter, and most people hate using that since it's really hard to master, but you seem quite good at it! I also liked the underlying message and the metaphor with cat and mouse. Nice cover as well. Overall, great job!
about 5 years ago Jasper♬ said:
This was great! I really like the rhythm this beat had. Made it very...catchy. One thing I noticed: The only form of punctuation was a question mark. Not sure if that was intentional, just wanted to let you know. I really like how there's a bigger message behind this. And the rhymes? AWESOME!! They fit perfectly and didn't sound cheesy at all. Double thumbs up!