Cat & Mouse

Cat & Mouse

1 chapter / 79 words

Approximately half a minute to read

Description:

A victim is determined to get her vengeance.

Genres:

Writing, Thriller, Poetry

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Comments(21)

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almost 5 years ago Lexi-Lu said:

That was cool...

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about 5 years ago ariana sexton-hughes said:

good work. the twist is nice. good rhythm.... powerful

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about 5 years ago Katie Darrow said:

This is incredible. All of your writing is incredible. It flows soooo well, and the rhymes come easily. Keep writing!

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about 5 years ago Sara Thorne said:

Sweet, simple, powerful. Clear imagery, great rhythm, simple message. Good job.

Reviews(4)

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about 5 years ago Connie X. said:

Wow what a great poem! I really loved your use of meter, and most people hate using that since it's really hard to master, but you seem quite good at it! I also liked the underlying message and the metaphor with cat and mouse. Nice cover as well. Overall, great job!

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about 5 years ago Jasper♬ said:

This was great! I really like the rhythm this beat had. Made it very...catchy. One thing I noticed: The only form of punctuation was a question mark. Not sure if that was intentional, just wanted to let you know. I really like how there's a bigger message behind this. And the rhymes? AWESOME!! They fit perfectly and didn't sound cheesy at all. Double thumbs up!