Looking Forward

Looking Forward

17 chapters / 43095 words

Approximately about 4 hours to read

Description:

NOTE: IT'S DONE

A tight knit group of friends confront the prospect of growing apart as they reach emerging adulthood.

Told through rotating narrators, this is the story of Henry Lei, Marc Hemlock, Missy Hemlock, Zoe Keiko, Eduardo "Edo" Ferrin, River Watson, and Jenna Franco in their own words.

COMPLETED 5/27/12

Genres:

Writing, Drama, Novel

Comments(3)

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over 5 years ago Lee Morvan said:

well i obviously havent finished reading it yet, but what i have read i love! great job :)

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over 5 years ago Kaitlyn Elizabeth said:

Wow, I adore your writing style. I agree that it's very professional. The characters seem very normal, very easy to relate with. Sometimes the paragraphs get a bit lengthy, though. I would like to see you break things up a bit and go into more directions with the subjects.

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over 5 years ago OvercomingDyslexic said:

I love it so far! Your writing style is very mature and professional and the transitions from narrative to narrative are very smooth. The characters are genuine as well and easy to relate to. My only suggestion is that you tend to be a bit wordy and go on bunny trails, so when you get back to the original point, the reader has no idea what's going on. There are also a few run-on sentences. Just remember that semicolons and 'and's are your friends :)

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over 5 years ago Vivian said:

Well done. Developed and written in a good style!