Him

Him

1 chapter / 208 words

Approximately 1 minute to read

Description:

Just a poem. Not my best. I was bored.

Genres:

Writing, Romance, Poetry

Comments(4)

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over 5 years ago haley oliver said:

yes u should i liked how girls can all relate to this feeling:)

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over 5 years ago Emily Bruss said:

hmmm. Something that runs through a girls head every time she sees her own "Him". This is a good representation of what so many people feel and can't express. By Your tag I assume this is something you actually feel. I think that you should let him know about how you feel. There's something everyone says that is so hard to. :) Great job! -Emily

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over 6 years ago 13 said:

This is really good!

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over 6 years ago Renee! said:

I really like how this poem tells a story. I think that you should include a bit of what this "Him" looks like. :3

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over 3 years ago C.M. Brighid Bachleda said:

For a poem that was written from boredom; it was good!!

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over 6 years ago Charlotte Hennessey said:

Nice poem! I like the emotion inside of it, it is "true" if you know what I mean. I like the line "any question" and "frog asking butterfly to dance" your voice shows through nicely there. On the other side, your tone did shift abruptly to overly straight-forward: "He's hot" Overall, great job! I enjoyed reading this.