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PLEASE READ THIS FOR ALL SWAPS!!!
over 4 years ago Autumn Skye said:
That was so freaking amazing.
over 4 years ago Hannah Jarzombek said:
The way this was written was just...perfection. Everything about it. Usually I'm a really harsh critic but this was...this was amazing. Though you did forget a word "I don't [know] what I was thinking"
This was just wow. Everything just worked with this piece. Wow.
over 4 years ago Jaz said:
Can you please read Hypnotistics Book One? Sorry it's so long
over 4 years ago Tom Petraglia said:
Sorry about taking so long! I've been really busy. But, it's a nice story. The imagery really adds to the feel, and it has a good flow to it. Good job :)
Oh my god. I love it. Thanks for asking me. I love it.
over 4 years ago Kelsey Garman said:
Wow, this is very powerful. You really captured her need to jump, and I loved the excerpts from her past, reminding her why she needed to stay. You did a great job, beautifully written.