Footsteps in the Dark

Footsteps in the Dark

11 chapters / 5156 words

Approximately 26 minutes to read

Description:

This is the rough draft of the screenplay I am writing for Script Frenzy. It is about a boarding school in New York. I hope you like it. Keep in mind that this is a rough draft.

-not completed-

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over 1 year ago Noella T said:

I love this!!! If you are interested in writing for a tv show or movie, join the group "Screenwriting Central :^)"

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about 2 years ago Lily Rose Marie said:

This is really cool! Only thing to watch: How they are talking. Use words that middle school girls might use. Instead of "That's a good point," most people would just say, "good point." Just watch for things like that. As a screenplay, it's meant to be written differently than a normal book.

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about 2 years ago Violet Heart said:

I enjoyed reading the script which was amazing! I really like where your taking this

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about 2 years ago Kristy Bowman said:

its good!!! please read my book called The Child

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about 2 years ago Elizabeth Rose said:

I really liked the plot ,but i think you need to edit how they talk. no offence ,but do you know any 6th graders who talk like that? But other then that it was really good.

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about 2 years ago Seraphim Rose said:

First of all, I REALLY enjoyed the first scene! It pulled me in and made it to where I just had to read more! Good job! In scene 2, after Colleen says "Neither can I," there is an unnecessary "the" in the next line. There are a few minor things after that, but it's only the rough draft so it doesn't really matter. Really good job with the first scene, though. I can't get over how that just dragged me in. It's a good piece. Keep it up. :]