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This is the rough draft of the screenplay I am writing for Script Frenzy. It is about a boarding school in New York. I hope you like it. Keep in mind that this is a rough draft.
over 4 years ago Noella Turk said:
I love this!!! If you are interested in writing for a tv show or movie, join the group "Screenwriting Central :^)"
over 4 years ago Lily Rose Marie said:
This is really cool! Only thing to watch: How they are talking. Use words that middle school girls might use. Instead of "That's a good point," most people would just say, "good point." Just watch for things like that. As a screenplay, it's meant to be written differently than a normal book.
over 4 years ago Violet Heart said:
I enjoyed reading the script which was amazing! I really like where your taking this
over 4 years ago Kristy Bowman said:
its good!!! please read my book called The Child
over 4 years ago Elizabeth Rose said:
I really liked the plot ,but i think you need to edit how they talk. no offence ,but do you know any 6th graders who talk like that? But other then that it was really good.
over 4 years ago Seraphim Rose said:
First of all, I REALLY enjoyed the first scene! It pulled me in and made it to where I just had to read more! Good job!
In scene 2, after Colleen says "Neither can I," there is an unnecessary "the" in the next line. There are a few minor things after that, but it's only the rough draft so it doesn't really matter. Really good job with the first scene, though. I can't get over how that just dragged me in. It's a good piece. Keep it up. :]