Little Island

Little Island

6 chapters / 11279 words

Approximately about 1 hour to read

Description:

Mirabelle DeMona washes up on some random island coming out of the pool during swim practice, and she has no idea what's going on. Soon she finds herself on a quest to bring back a nameless Queen, avoiding the deadly octopi and the omnious Cactuslands, and perhaps even falling in love with the white-eyed army page Foster. Maybe she should be glad that it isn't a dream afterall.
**Inspired by Alice in Wonderland but COMPLETELY original!**
**INCOMPLETE**
ALSO -if you make covers or you have a suggestion PLEASE let me know!!! I'm always on the look for a good cover; I haven't been consistently happy with one yet!!!!!!

Genres:

Adventure, Fantasy, Novel

Comments(8)

Beach girl

over 5 years ago Natasha V. said:

You have a very original and fantastical idea going on here. I really like what I've read so far--which is just a chapter--but it's super good. Nice job!

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over 5 years ago Krystal Fragoso said:

I love the idea. I actually have never read Alice in Wonderland, if it is a book since I don't know. This book was very creative, and I will be back to read more. I loved the description, that only made me want to read it more. Great job, and keep writing.

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over 5 years ago Joannie said:

i read chapter one, and its really great! the only thing is that the beginning seems too rushed...maybe add a little bit more detail about her swimming laps and such before jumping straight into finding this other place. great job! :)

Fig

over 5 years ago Lilly Maison said:

Wow! Very different, and very well written. I really liked that you weren't afraid to make things a bit silly. A lot of the work here is pretty serious, and a lot of the time people forget the value of amusement. I really liked how the story had a slightly creepy tone behind all of the silliness. Great job!

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