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almost 5 years ago Jungle Moose said:
I like it, very creeper, very clever at the end, very interesting.
Well done this is awesome.
I am glad you took some of Stonia's advice but I do think the flow still needs sorting out somewhat.
about 5 years ago Franchesca Bodnar said:
very nice! i love the ending!
about 5 years ago Cari Adel said:
Hey, I like this. I like the last line especially, and how you described the words as "rotting away". Good job, and good luck in the contest!
about 5 years ago Chance said:
Hey I'm the one with the drug dealer entry for Killer Flash, you said to come check out your poem so I did, and I loved it. very Well written,you did an amazing job.
about 4 years ago Tryptichyrio said:
For the very first time, I am almost speechless. All I can say is that we all have that body in the backyard. Or two, of ten, or thirty; the really stack up don't they. Like a house of cards, one building up after another.
about 5 years ago Victoria March said:
Ahhh! That was great! Loved the imagery, it was amazing!