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A village has fog surrounded by it. No one dares go out, until Coe and her friend Finn change everything by exploring the unknown.
almost 6 years ago Jasper Blood said:
I like the way you write in short fragments, cutting off the 'chapters' at certain points- It builds up a lot of suspense. This is very intriguing, please continue!
about 6 years ago Sara Lau said:
I enjoy how you always write in short, concise parts, but you may want to add how the girl feels about her father dying. Good idea so far!
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