He Promised

He Promised

1 chapter / 594 words

Approximately 3 minutes to read

Description:

This is a short story I wrote about a woman who's in denial about her husband dying in battle. She continues to tell herself he's deployed. I tried to make the letter seem realistic by looking at an example letter so tell me how you think I did. Thanks!

Comments(9)

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about 5 years ago Brittany Hartā¤ said:

wow this is very sad, and this could really happen is the even more sad part. My friend is in the military and he is getting to get deployed I hope this does not turn out to be his story. Good job writing this you made it come alive never stop writing. ~Brittany.

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about 5 years ago ally Marie said:

So sad it made me almost cry! It made me really sad though when the lady couldn't believe the news and still thinks he's coming home

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over 5 years ago Moira Kehoe said:

beautiful...

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over 5 years ago Ashlyn Helligso said:

sad but really good writing

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about 5 years ago Madelyn Neal said:

Depressing but very well written!