Valley of Angels

Valley of Angels

1 chapter / 101 words

Approximately half a minute to read


Writing, Poetry



over 5 years ago Tiffany said:

Very cool idea! I love this poem, it flowed really, really nicely and the image I got from it was very clear and nice. I like the saying "every rose comes with its thorns". Keep writing!



over 5 years ago Linn Kirchhoff said:

Very nice! I liked how it sounded, it didn't rhyme in the cheesy, obvious way, but the words flowed in harmony. You found that nice balance. I loved the imagery and the twist at the end! Very good work!!


over 5 years ago Daniela Bourlotos said:

That was really really good. The subtle yet enticing way your poem flowed was amazing. Keep writing :)


over 5 years ago Laina O'Shields said:

This was gorgeous!!!!!!!!!!! The words and the imagery it conveyed... Wow. Breath taking. The only line i didn't like was the last one, where you say, 'touched head' That just seems awkward and ruins the beautiful flow of this piece. I'm impressed. Males on figment are few and far between. Ones that can ACTUALLY WRITE? Rarer still. Amazingly done!



over 5 years ago tiffany williams said:

This is really good. It could be split into stanzas though, verses and I feel as if it were not finished, but it's very good. The descriptions, though short becasue of the way you have chosen to write this, provided the reader, me, with a vivid picture of the angel/devil. I liked the twist of the angel being the devil, quite clever. Altogether it was good, though some of the rhymes felt forced, but some flowed with poetic ease.


over 5 years ago integral_x said:

Loved this! :)