Blackbirds

Blackbirds

3 chapters / 1366 words

Approximately 7 minutes to read

Description:

This is a snippet of a full-length novel I am writing. THE full-length novel, the one that I want to publish, so while I don't plan on posting the whole thing there will probably be more excerpts in the future. I have about 13,000 words so far. :) Awesome cover by smcb. Thank you!!!!

Genres:

Adventure, Fantasy, Novel

Comments(32)

Waterhouse102

about 4 years ago Lieder Madchen said:

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over 5 years ago Farin L. said:

Free read, the beginning drew me in. I seriously love this and I'd definitely read it if it was published! Your beginning is excellent and engaging-made me really want to read more. If I could, I'd give you a heart for ever chapter. :)

-Farin L.

Firstlucy

over 5 years ago A. DiGiovine said:

Yeah, I still love it. In a lot of these sort of stories written by "amateur" writers, they aren't well written or thought out and the plot is lost. I should know, I'm writing something very similar, but yours is fantastic. It's wonderfully written, and you at least seem to have a good handle on what you want to happen. Can't wait for more.

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Hatter's hat

over 5 years ago MCT said:

Post. This. Novel. Like asap! I seriously need more. The language, the beautiful way the words flowed, and the way you kept my attention throughout the entire piece left me CRAVING more. I am kinda addicted. This is great. :D Mady

Dsc03421

over 5 years ago Vivian Thai said:

This was well-written! I want to read more but I read on your description that you aren't going to post the whole book on figment :( Anyways the descriptions you used are wonderful I saw a few things in the prologue:

"creatures in the *word" *world

"lain" Captalize Names

Awkward sentences: "However mages picked up their feline attributes may have..."

Keep up the great writing my part of our swap

"but that was nothing to what his son did"