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Lost in Love with you
4 chapters / 2148 words
Approximately 11 minutes to read
Description:
17 year old Hanna has to deal with her life long best friend and now soul mate getting beat by his father. He moves in and starts a new life. When suddenly a strange missing person alert makes Hanna and Jeremy wonder, will they be safe for long.
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about 1 year ago Natasha k. said:
OK. I have a feeling I know who your basing Jer on (Raises eyebrows, raises eyebrows). you said 10 minutes twice I would change one of them to a different time of just say a while and change 10 to ten. You also said something like I jolted towards him, I think that should be "Jogged". Luv it gurlie!