Read and hearted =] If you would, please check out "Straightaway" on my page and if you like it, push that lil' ol' heart button. If you have already, my apologies and no response necessary haha =]. If you want, let me know whatever else you'd like me to read on your page and I'd be happy to.
I enjoyed this so much! The story that was told was just so amazing, I loved it! One of the best free verse poems I have read. Amazing job! I saw no flaws.
This is really good! I feel that you have a very good start on this story. I did not see a lot grammatical errors in it. I loved how it started with a letter, expressing her feelings. The character has a really level headed calmness to her which in some stories, you don't see a lot. Please continue! :D
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4 months ago Amaryliss White said:
Really beautiful! I loved every minute and every word of it. :)
5 months ago Omar Saeed said:
Read and hearted =] If you would, please check out "Straightaway" on my page and if you like it, push that lil' ol' heart button. If you have already, my apologies and no response necessary haha =]. If you want, let me know whatever else you'd like me to read on your page and I'd be happy to.
8 months ago Not Applicable said:
Wonderfully done, this was truely, nicely written. I enjoyed it, so well done :)
9 months ago Tid Bit said:
I loved it!
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about 1 month ago Jade Elaine said:
I enjoyed this so much! The story that was told was just so amazing, I loved it! One of the best free verse poems I have read. Amazing job! I saw no flaws.
10 months ago Jessy Rainn said:
This is really good! I feel that you have a very good start on this story. I did not see a lot grammatical errors in it. I loved how it started with a letter, expressing her feelings. The character has a really level headed calmness to her which in some stories, you don't see a lot. Please continue! :D