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Featured in the October 2013 Teen Ink magazine. Finalist in the sweet evil contest. A story of temptation and a cow.
over 2 years ago Kason said:
Cows are my favorite animals! Despite this, the story was well made and had me on the edge of my seat. I felt like I was there, watching you brutally mutilate that cow! Great work!
almost 3 years ago Amanda Mae Garrett said:
"My heart pumped like a disco beat..."
Sorry, I just loved that simile.
Anyway, I feel like there was real emotion and thirst in the story, and you conveyed it well. It is a very well written piece.
almost 3 years ago Sam Bailey said:
WOW. I loved this, it was a good story. It was so scary!!!!!!!!!!!!!
almost 3 years ago Kira Foster said:
Holy crap! This was awesome and a little overwhelming for how much imagery was infused into so little space!! This was great.
almost 3 years ago Jon Lessels said:
Hey it's Jon from Maryland, here with your Grandpa. I was reading Lifting Images and on paragraph 5, you spelled it aagainst, but it is against.
Just wanted to let you know :P
JK I don't really actually care, the story was definitely original, I love it.
ANYWAY: Your Grandpa and my Mom both say hi!!!
almost 3 years ago Abbey Evans said:
O_O Wow! Very unique.