1 chapter / 1200 words

Approximately 6 minutes to read


Suadela is the Roman Goddess of Persuasion and love. Both of those things fuel the fire in the unlikely romance between Rae and her married cab driver, Joey. Will her lust be the coal that sets their lives a blaze?



over 5 years ago Rei Furutaka said:

Very well done. I really like it :) Very descriptive! Good job. Good luck in the contest :) Keep up the good work ;)


over 5 years ago Myranda Neizer said:

Just google, "the temptation of st.anthony" and you'll see lots of paintings similar to this one; with a saint lost in the desert or praying at an alter while surrounded by naked, beautiful woman.


over 5 years ago Myranda Neizer said:

I don't know if you guys have noticed or not, but the art goes amazingly well with the story as well! St. Anthony was a Saint who was tempted supernaturally during his sojourn in the Egyptian desert. There are many paintings displaying st. Anthony being tempted by woman/sinful desires while on his journey.


over 5 years ago Julia World~Weaver said:

I seriously hope you continue this after the contest!!!! :)



over 5 years ago Whitney said:

Whew, this was such a cool story to read. Your words flow together beautifully, there's a pleasing touch of the erotic here along with the romance that I liked a lot. This was very mature and I liked the addition of the scripture from Matthew. That really punched the story very well. Is it enough to just love? I think it is, but what an interesting concept to explore. Good job, and good luck in the contest!