(Sweet Evil contest first place winner!!! PLEASE heart.) Based on the Grimm Brothers' "The Seven Swans", a tale of the princess who gave up everything--including love--to save her brothers.
After reading your other story, I decided to read this one as it's one of my favorites. Have you read 'daughter of the forest' by Juliet marillier? Your story reminded me of her book.
This was such a sad story, yet so beautifully written! If only she could find him after the seven years, then they could have their happily ever after. Or maybe that's just wishful thinking. Anyways, awesome job!
Beautiful. A heartfelt piece. I just want to know the end of their love. It was magically. Love needs no words; words are just a gift. I didn't understand if he stayed stayed (like stayed in heart not in body) with the Swan Girl. Congrats on being on the homepage!
Very creative! I got a little confused at times but I guess that’s just me. Honestly I couldn’t find any grammatical mistakes and I love your writing! I can’t wait to read more of you work!!
Comments(193)
13 days ago Headintheclouds said:
After reading your other story, I decided to read this one as it's one of my favorites. Have you read 'daughter of the forest' by Juliet marillier? Your story reminded me of her book.
I love your writing :)
29 days ago Simran J said:
This was such a sad story, yet so beautifully written! If only she could find him after the seven years, then they could have their happily ever after. Or maybe that's just wishful thinking. Anyways, awesome job!
29 days ago Aviline said:
Beautiful. A heartfelt piece. I just want to know the end of their love. It was magically. Love needs no words; words are just a gift. I didn't understand if he stayed stayed (like stayed in heart not in body) with the Swan Girl. Congrats on being on the homepage!
29 days ago Glittergirl said:
It was so beautiful. You writing is simply magic and so enchanting.
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29 days ago Glittergirl said:
It was so beautiful. You writing is simply magic and so enchanting.
11 months ago Keera Marie Baraly said:
Very creative! I got a little confused at times but I guess that’s just me. Honestly I couldn’t find any grammatical mistakes and I love your writing! I can’t wait to read more of you work!!