UNFINSIHED. A HG fanfic, through my version of Finnick's son, Kai's, eyes. It starts out as letters from him to Finnick, and then at the end there's a bit of story if I ever get around to writing that part XP
PLEASE READ WAITING ON FINN :) It's my Mockingjay Fanfic from Annie's perspective and in my opinion it's much better than this one :)
I couldn't read a few of the chapters, but I could read the rest of them, and it made complete sense. I still really like this story, and I think you ended it perfectly.
I totally don't agree with the person below me! :) I think spelling errors are great! What boy these ages spells correctly?! Although, I do think the spellings errors are... the wrong errors. :) Put a few in there, but make them phonetically true... something that sounds like it's right, but it isn't. And the name Kai sounds great... I haven't read the 2nd or 3rd books, so I don't know anything about Finnick or his son. I do like the last idea the writer below me gave-- "I have to, or else I'll be like mom." :) Anyway, loved it!
Comments(23)
7 months ago Rachael said:
SO CUTE!
8 months ago Lizzyp23 said:
i love what you put. that would have been a perfect ending if suzanne would have written another book.
9 months ago Zombie Zoe said:
I couldn't read a few of the chapters, but I could read the rest of them, and it made complete sense. I still really like this story, and I think you ended it perfectly.
9 months ago Deadpool said:
I am so sad right now. I really liked how you conveyed your words. Please check me and my story Angel out.
Reviews(5)
9 months ago jenica prospero said:
nice ... you minimized the words but it maximized the emotions of the readers.. nice work..
9 months ago theoneandonlyjo said:
I totally don't agree with the person below me! :) I think spelling errors are great! What boy these ages spells correctly?! Although, I do think the spellings errors are... the wrong errors. :) Put a few in there, but make them phonetically true... something that sounds like it's right, but it isn't. And the name Kai sounds great... I haven't read the 2nd or 3rd books, so I don't know anything about Finnick or his son. I do like the last idea the writer below me gave-- "I have to, or else I'll be like mom." :) Anyway, loved it!