As Free As Her Little Red Locks

As Free As Her Little Red Locks

4 chapters / 1209 words

Approximately 6 minutes to read

Description:

As Free As Her Little Red Locks, copyright to Jordan (:
NOT FINISHED YET(:

Genres:

Writing, Adventure, Drama

Comments(29)

Sam_0407

over 5 years ago Chloe Wright said:

When i was doing our swap, I saw this story and thought I'd have to take a look because it looked very interesting, the cover drew me in....I really liked it..!:)

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over 5 years ago Jay Bird said:

I love your title it fits the uniqueness of the story, and thats rare to find!

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over 5 years ago reb the reader said:

this piece is beatifuly written, and it's so touching :) i can feel the love the gradfather feels for his dead wife, and the perfect details add alot to the story!! it was very clever to change perspectives...you have a great start here, and should definatly continue it ASAP :)

Blanket burrito

over 5 years ago Nove Payne said:

This is really cute! Your descriptions really made the story--for lack of a better phrase--come to life. Great job! -Keely

Reviews(6)

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over 5 years ago Cassidy Brynn Stokes said:

This is a good start. I don't really have anything bad to say but I didn't neccisarily LOVE it either. But thats okay, I don't love most story's.

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over 5 years ago arachnidsGrip said:

This is such a cute story! I just love how quaint it is. The writing style is really good, and the dialogue seemed fairly natural. I love the image of the grandpa with the granddaughter on his knee by the fireplace. Perfect. Just a few minor problems at the end of the 2nd part. You used 'grandma' instead of 'grandpa' a few times, and put a period in the middle of a sentence where there shouldn't be one. Otherwise, very good. Honestly, this isn't my favorite genre of story, but this was still really interesting for me to read. Keep writing!