A Critical History of the Old&the New

A Critical History of the Old&the New

1 chapter / 174 words

Approximately less than a minute to read

Description:

My poetry :) please give it a read!

Genres:

Writing, Poetry

Comments(14)

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about 5 years ago Nerina Summer-Leah Blais said:

Flitterific!! I love your poem. This definately deserves a heart from me!!!!

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over 5 years ago M.L.E. Mae said:

your great at poetry. this was better then drip.

Desert

over 5 years ago Phil F. said:

This was really interesting. I liked the questions that were asked, though you are the one to understand the why. I read over Matthew's review, and if you haven't I think he has some good points throughout it. Anyways, you're great at poetry. I love your words. -Ez

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over 5 years ago Justin Von Wahlde said:

This poem is interesting to say the least, I really liked the vocabulary and I didn't have any trouble finding the flow. Of course, what I liked about it most is how you posed the question "your love, was it glue..." I dunno it kinda struck me as a cool way to say it.

The part where you're questions were multiple lines kinda threw me at first, but not much you can do to avoid that. Overall I liked it = )

Reviews(6)

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about 5 years ago Nerina Summer-Leah Blais said:

All I can say is "Flitterific!!" This is one amazing poem. You have a way with words.

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over 5 years ago Grace Whitney C. said:

Beautiful. I thought it was funny how every line ended with the U sound, but at the same time it took away a little bit from what the piece is about. The U sound at the end of every line made the piece kinda funny, and I don't think humor was what you had intended. But other than that it was great! :)