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Based on my story, "The Lone Ronin" which I'm going to write for Camp Nanowrimo this year.
over 3 years ago Kris Skater said:
I love this! It reminds me of Spiderman. I hope you will continue?
over 3 years ago Cera Belle said:
I know I use this word a lot but this time it really counts...
This is interesting. I don't know if it's a manga version of Super Man/Spider Man/Batman or if it's just this story with something unique and twisted going on with it. That's all meant in a good way. But I did like it. I'm curious to see where you're going with it.
over 3 years ago shadley said:
I LOVE this start! It's very Lois Lane and Clark Kent, with the hidden identity and the love interest pursuing the alter ego. You put action and dialogue and provided a good base for your main character's personality.
over 3 years ago PaigeD said:
I like this! I think it's kind of cute; she knows he's the Lone Ronin, right? Great work!
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