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Approximately 36 minutes to read
Novel. Questioning sexuality. Love in a foreign country.
almost 2 years ago Behind Sapphire Eyes said:
I don't know what to say. I've stayed up reading this story from first page to last. I've never read something about a real life experience with gay love involved. After reading this I want nothing more than to befriend you. I wish you a happy life with your wonderful man. Thank you for writing this. You're amazing.
over 4 years ago Jeremy Keller said:
This story is so... AMAZING! I love your writing style and the way the story flows. Incredible job!
over 4 years ago Bailey Bagwell said:
over 5 years ago Whimsically_Me said:
Wow...I don't even know what to say, let alone where to start. So, I think I'll leave you with this:
Well done! :D
over 5 years ago Kristina D. Hartman said:
There are no words to discribe how this story made me feel, it was incredible.
~!stay cool, Stay hot, Stay Sexy!~
about 6 years ago Brandon Gallagher said:
Dearest AmFlux (So tempted to use your actual name!),
I confess that at the beginning of the story, I wasn't sure if I was going to enjoy it. Granted, I was touched for the dedication, as I'm sure everyone else who has read the story and was mentioned is, but a part of me was... I'm unable to describe it. Terrified? I don't know. The emotions that this piece made me feel were utterly BRILLIANT. Never has a story made me feel nervous for the outcome and actually causes me to cringe. (Not to give away the plot to the people who haven't read it yet, but the part involves your tounge.)
As for the writing itself, I enjoyed the different style. As you noted on Facebook (yes, we're Facebook Friends) my writing style has a tendency to be more poetic and metaphorical, where as yours is very blunt, but rythmic. I find it to be like a waltz or tango almost. (I forgot to mention to you that I know all the classical dances. So whenever you'd make a reference to a dance, I would be like, "YES! I KNOW THAT ONE!")
Subject matter: absoultely adored it. I was nervous and scared for you but passionately hoping that the story would end the way it did. You had asked me what I thought of your sexuality on Facebook, and I figure it only fair to tell you that you already know what my answer is going to be, simply review the final sentence of your story. That's the way I believe it SHOULD be, now and forever.
Over all, I deepley enjoyed this piece of writing. Style was beautiful, subject matter was terrifying and amazing, and I hope we will stay in touch!
P.S. Look for my new story I'm working on, or message me on Facebook for the Code. There just so happens to be a character named --insert your name here-- as a sort of... I'm unsure, thank you for your dedication? This story totally provides background to the character. If you don't mind that is.