The Voice that Kept the Song ©

The Voice that Kept the Song ©

1 chapter / 213 words

Approximately 1 minute to read


copyright © 2012 ************************************************ The Beast has risen and taken control of the world. Darkness has taken over everything...or so it seems...



over 1 year ago Alexandr Lukin said:

ShowBox program allows you to watch Hollywood movies and Serials too, TV shows which are loved to see you daily, you can explore Showbox app at every moment in every day of your life.


almost 5 years ago Kirby K said:

Wow that was really good! It tells such a story!



over 5 years ago Leah Johnson said:

This is quite interesting. I'm not really a poetry person, but this was transparent, unlike some poetry I've read. You had some beautiful metaphors; I noticed you seem to compare hope to water, was that intentional? I think I'd like to hear a few more details about the mystical voice, though. Is this a literal voice, as in one person is still hopeful, or is it a more symbolic voice perhaps representing faith? Details in general would probably be welcome. --L P.S. I love this title. It has great rhythm.


over 5 years ago Carrie S Faber said:

This is really great! It flows really nicely and is a very interesting poem/story. I love it! Nice work.