CHILDISH DREAMS

CHILDISH DREAMS

1 chapter / 200 words

Approximately 1 minute to read

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For the Princess of Iowa Contest. Help me reach my goal of 100 hearts!

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over 5 years ago Hope Grammer said:

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over 5 years ago Abbey Evans said:

Awhh, how sweet! I like the way you ended this and how far this short little story went... Only found two errors; One was right in the second paragraph- "I Knew my step-mom would be up any minute to throw away anything on my floor." Step mom is one word I think,I mean two, lol. And "I Knew" should be "I knew." Also, I think "aspiration" should be "inspiration", but I'm not sure. Anyways, this small story went a long way and I think it's very inspirational and touching. Great job!(: