Beauty and the Bionic

Beauty and the Bionic

1 chapter / 554 words

Approximately 3 minutes to read

Description:

A punk spin of Beauty and the Beast, for the UnholyMash contest. Enjoy! :) [Is this a decent idea? Let me know!]

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over 4 years ago Amelia Robinson said:

I loved that line: "What am I not?" THAT really brought the story to life for me, because it wasn't what I was expecting him to say. Great work! I love Beauty and the Beast stories -- I'd love to see this as a novel! :)

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over 5 years ago Emilee Winter said:

wow this is really good!!!! it is a great retelling of the story. i loved the element of suspense! the descriptions were great and there were not that many grammar issues. this is really great and has lots of potential, please continue!

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over 5 years ago Amanda K. Thompson said:

*Swap*

Yes. Oh my gosh, YES! 'Beauty and the Beast' is one of my favorites, and this is utterly brilliant.

I love how you incorporated overly scientific phrases into the descriptions. The only one that confused me was when it mentioned that Beauty's biosigns 'raced across the screen'. I had assumed that she was human, but this makes me wonder if she is actually machine? Part machine as well? A little clarification there would be wonderful.

Beauty is quite forthright with her anger, and I love that you chose to focus on that, instead of starting in on the romantic tension.

I really like how you chose to just concentrate on this scene, instead of trying to tell the whole story in the short space allotted. It shows some forethought and an effort to stay within the word count without rushing it.

Excellent; truly excellent. The writing is wonderful, the story flows nicely, and I really hope that you choose to continue on with this. I'd love to see where you take it!