You and Me

You and Me

12 chapters / 491 words

Approximately 2 minutes to read

Description:

PLEASE READD!!!! This is about just a normal, AMAZING, love between a girl and a boy

Genres:

Writing, Drama, Poetry

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Comments(20)

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over 1 year ago paige williams said:

I like the poem although it could have been a little longer

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over 5 years ago Lauren said:

I loved it. :D that's all i can say.

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over 5 years ago Jaia Lawrence said:

This is good! It portrays such a cute romance, and it seemed very real. It actually made me just a smidgen jealous :) So great job!

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over 5 years ago Coco said:

This is so sweet! Great job!

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over 5 years ago Anna Eshelman said:

This is really beautiful! Good job!

I just saw one thing...in Voice, the third poem, you mix up "your" and "you're". In the last line and the third-to-last line, you have "your" when it should be "you're".

Other than that, though, this is amazing!! You did an incredible job. :)

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over 5 years ago Christine Johansen said:

I love the relationship between those two. It's such a gentle, true kind of love. I can tell that you really know how to describe true love, maybe you have experienced it. I was expecting a break up to happen somewhere in there but there wasn't! Yay! After every chapter I was like "It's gonna happen in this chapter....I guess not.....no this one....nope" Wonderful job as usual :D