Slipping Away

Slipping Away

1 chapter / 386 words

Approximately 2 minutes to read

Description:

(Cover by TheHalf-Light) Time is running out; but there is nothing she can do. The earthquake has split her family apart. All she has left is her sister, who is lucky enough to climb out of the debris just in time. She's dying; she counts down till there is nothing left...

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about 1 year ago MaxVor said:

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almost 4 years ago Michaela said:

This was a beautiful piece. I love how I can easily put myself in as the character, enhancing the effects of your words. I wasn't limited by a specific look of the main character. It was really beautiful and I feel like you made it what you wanted it to be. If you wanted it to be longer, it would be but I don't think it should be. This was lovely, thank you :)

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almost 4 years ago B.Brien said:

Amazing job! I got goosebumps.

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over 3 years ago Ann Kristin said:

I really enjoyed to read this poem. I love the way you described everything. You have a huge talent when it comes to writing.

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almost 4 years ago Camillia Rose said:

Okay I am here for the swap! Starting this was very easy to pick up. Although I am not a fan of the tense/ view you wrote in (the sort of like future tense that's the only way I know how to describe it!) but I can't judge it simply it because it is not my personal liking! I did enjoy your descriptions and it seemed quite poetic! Great job!