Monster

Monster

1 chapter / 151 words

Approximately less than a minute to read

Description:

One of the winners of the KadyCrossFlash. A short steampunk story that takes place during the Victorian Era. Jessamine's clockwork. Half-human, half- automaton. All monster. Thank you guys for reaching my goal of 50! New of 100, maybe?

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6 months ago Yourron said:

I read Monster story. Monster is great story. I really enjoy it.

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8 months ago Alexandr Lukin said:

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almost 2 years ago OvercomingDyslexic said:

It's a really fantastic idea, but the flash fiction needs editing (specifically, you use the wrong form of 'you're' and the word 'precariously' is used incorrectly). Jessie comes off as a little melodramatic and annoying, but the dialogue is good and I loooooooove the idea for a novel. I definitely want to read it if you do expand, so notify me please :)

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almost 2 years ago Alex Kindel said:

Hey Alex, I read your story, Monster. (My name is Alex too. Awesome!)

I love these short scenes, I have them all the time with random characters. Very short but sometimes they're very powerful. You have a great image here, very nice.

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about 1 year ago Z. B. Grubb said:

Short and sweet, your writing is amazing

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over 2 years ago Danielle Laufeyson said:

I quite enjoyed that. You were able to create captivating characters in only a few paragraphs. Great job.