The Suicide Letter

The Suicide Letter

12 chapters / 27623 words

Approximately about 2 hours to read

Description:

When Milo Dunbarr loses his one true love, he spirals into a deep depression. He plans on killing himself not just to ease his pain, but the pain of the ones around him. Before he does this horrible act, he writes his memories of the last six months down. The memories of his precious Lucy. (The book isn't completely finished.)

Genres:

Romance, Novel, Drama

Comments(62)

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almost 4 years ago Bo said:

I've only read some of this and I really, really love it! Though, both Milo and Sawyer sound very... Girly. The way they act and such. But I just love it.

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over 5 years ago Miette Leclair said:

Can't wait to read more!

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over 5 years ago Angelica said:

Finish!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I love it so much!!!!!!!!!! It leaved me in suspense

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about 6 years ago Evelyn Wagner said:

you need to hurry and finish! I can't wait for the rest! it is getting really good!

Reviews(11)

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about 6 years ago M.C. said:

I am so sick right now that I can't focus on one thing. I got to the end of the first chapter, and I feel like a success because that's the most I've been able to read all day. I really enjoyed it, I'm only really writing this so that later, when I am well and can focus, I will read the rest. The only thing I think you need to edit, is the very last sentence. It's in past-tense while the rest of it is in present-tense. Yeah. That's it. Great work. Can't wait to read the rest. :)

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over 6 years ago Katelyn G said:

Hii I just realied that I never hearted this story!! I read it in March and I guess I forgot to o_o Well this is a really awesome story but I was actually hesitant to read it before. The reason was because I thought it'd be really sad because there was depression/suicide stuff and I always get sad when I read stuff like that haha But then I started reading and I just haad to find out more.

I think your strongest point in writing is that you portray the characters very well. I love how sweet Lucy is and Milo is just really awesome. I also like April because she seems like an awesome older sister. You also did a really good job with the relationship of Milo annd his dad. I especially liked the akwardness when Lucy came over to meet Milo's dad. I really like the friendship that Sawyer and Milo have. Sawyer is an amazing character and you portray him perfectly with the comments that he says. I'm guessing that your editing all this stuff now and hopefully are adding more to where you left off =) I totally love this story and I hope you continue =]