Tell Me As I Fall Asleep

Tell Me As I Fall Asleep

1 chapter / 192 words

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A poem! duh :) Oh, and for any Carrie Underwood fans out there, in my head I always play this poem to her song "Do You Think About Me"*I'm thinking of entering this in a local contest, tell me what you think and if I shoud!*


Writing, Romance, Poetry



over 4 years ago Erin Marie said:

Omigosh, this is perfect! And the Carriw Underwood song does go well with it :)


over 5 years ago Allie said:

This is so sweet^_^


over 5 years ago Cat Jordan said:

thanks so much guys!

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over 5 years ago Victoria W. said:

Wow! I love this! :D I mean it. It flows beautifully, its marvelously written. Just wonderful!



over 5 years ago Haley Carr said:

This is definately my favorite poem of yours. Last line is perfection, and your good at happy stuff. Which is good. Because you know I can't write happy stuff. So I will get my fill from yours! :D


over 5 years ago Scribe said:

I cannot even EXPRESS how incredibly beautiful this poem is! You are so talented, it is unbelievable. Every single thing is perfect. The build up, the execution, the writing, the descriptions, the END. Oh, so beautiful! This poem should be published. Immediately.