Ever After

Ever After

3 chapters / 744 words

Approximately 4 minutes to read

Description:

*Work in progress*

Genres:

Adventure, Fantasy, Novel

Comments(1)

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over 5 years ago Stephanie Ashworth said:

This is a very good start!!

Reviews(2)

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over 5 years ago Blair said:

Great start, I’d love if you published the later chapters. I just have one suggestion. In the end when the old man just pops the question, want to come to my island." it is a little sudden. If you added a sentence or two more as transition it would be great!

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over 5 years ago Koda said:

This is an amazing start, I love the mystery added in the last little bit.