why

why

1 chapter / 51 words

Approximately less than 20 seconds to read

Description:

I'm sorry if this brings you down just I'm writing from my own experiences here

Genres:

Poetry

Comments(12)

Lillypulitzer

over 5 years ago C.A.S said:

I liked the why. I felt there was too much we and it didn't really flow.

Ilse esme

over 5 years ago Connie Rayburn said:

Very Thought provoking. Nice work and thanks for swapping!

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over 5 years ago Christine Johansen said:

This is so true. I wish people could look past just the skin. This is a very enlightening poem. I like how you bolded the "us" and "we" for emphasis. Great job :)

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over 5 years ago Laina O'Shields said:

Perfectly done. Why is an amazing word, you can question absolutely anything with it.

Reviews(3)

Faithselfie

about 5 years ago Faith Ally said:

Wow, I really liked this! It makes you think. Good Job.

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over 5 years ago M. Hebert said:

I really like this poem. The only thing is that the lines just because/you/ can't see past...." kind of messs with the flow. It might work better (I'm just suggesting feel free to ignore me) if you went We/ who can't see past...' instead. Other than that this poem has a great message and leaves a question in the readers minds.