Supernatural Summer

Supernatural Summer

2 chapters / 519 words

Approximately 3 minutes to read

Description:

©2012 Summer Reading Contest Finalist! Aria has to spend the summer at her grandma's, but a horrible memory on a summer night ruins it all...

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Comments(266)

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over 5 years ago Lizzie Rose said:

good job and well writen!

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over 5 years ago Jessica A. Critiquer said:

Never expected that ending. you write well, keep at it! Oh, and good luck in the contest!

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over 5 years ago C.A.S said:

Aw :/ She killed her grandma. I think the other comments and reviews pretty sizes up what I would like to say.

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over 5 years ago piecegakuen1000@gmail.com said:

Very sad story! Great by the way!! I feel bad the girl kill her own grandmother. Love the story

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over 3 years ago Linn Pena said:

This was wonderful with an unexpected ending to it. I loved the uniqueness of your story. ^_^

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over 5 years ago Emi said:

This reminds me a bit of what happened with a character called 'Red' in the tv show 'Once Upon A Time'. It was well written and I loved the ending, but the dialogue between the girl and her grandmother at the beginning was a little rushed. Also, I felt like you could have foreshadowed what was about to happen by going into more detail about the Incident. Overall a nice eerie story; I can imagine it being told around a campfire. Keep writing!