Supernatural Summer

Supernatural Summer

2 chapters / 519 words

Approximately 3 minutes to read

Description:

©2012 Summer Reading Contest Finalist! Aria has to spend the summer at her grandma's, but a horrible memory on a summer night ruins it all...

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Comments(266)

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over 5 years ago Sadie Collins said:

very good, excellent writing!

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over 5 years ago T. Patterson said:

great story. I really do not see how someone can write a story with a word count because I cannot seem to do so. I wish you luck on the contest, I think you will do well!

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over 5 years ago Haven Fowler said:

If you were going for a weird twist on 'Red-riding hood' you did a GREAT job! If not you still did a great job at writing it!

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over 5 years ago Cantiny said:

great story, i love your use of strong words.

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over 3 years ago Linn Pena said:

This was wonderful with an unexpected ending to it. I loved the uniqueness of your story. ^_^

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over 5 years ago Emi said:

This reminds me a bit of what happened with a character called 'Red' in the tv show 'Once Upon A Time'. It was well written and I loved the ending, but the dialogue between the girl and her grandmother at the beginning was a little rushed. Also, I felt like you could have foreshadowed what was about to happen by going into more detail about the Incident. Overall a nice eerie story; I can imagine it being told around a campfire. Keep writing!