Supernatural Summer

Supernatural Summer

2 chapters / 519 words

Approximately 3 minutes to read

Description:

©2012 Summer Reading Contest Finalist! Aria has to spend the summer at her grandma's, but a horrible memory on a summer night ruins it all...

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Comments(266)

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over 5 years ago Mickey said:

I liked it a lot. Is there going to be a romantic relationship with Brandi, and Nigel??

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over 5 years ago Kiersten Nicole Shafer said:

That was so funny! I loved her personality!

It might feel a little rushed, but I think you got a lot done in 500 words!

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over 5 years ago Kiersten Nicole Shafer said:

It felt slightly rushed, but did really well for only 500 words... so well done!

It made me smile, and I loved her personality.

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over 5 years ago J. Li said:

I agree with the others, that it was a little rushed, but I understand with the word limit and all. Great job!

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over 3 years ago Linn Pena said:

This was wonderful with an unexpected ending to it. I loved the uniqueness of your story. ^_^

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over 5 years ago Emi said:

This reminds me a bit of what happened with a character called 'Red' in the tv show 'Once Upon A Time'. It was well written and I loved the ending, but the dialogue between the girl and her grandmother at the beginning was a little rushed. Also, I felt like you could have foreshadowed what was about to happen by going into more detail about the Incident. Overall a nice eerie story; I can imagine it being told around a campfire. Keep writing!