Supernatural Summer

Supernatural Summer

2 chapters / 519 words

Approximately 3 minutes to read


©2012 Summer Reading Contest Finalist! Aria has to spend the summer at her grandma's, but a horrible memory on a summer night ruins it all...

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over 5 years ago Niki Castelli said:

I will admit that the story didn't end the way I expected it to, but it was funny and entertaining nevertheless. However, introducing Nigel only to have Brandi quit before he can serve any importance is kind of confusing. You may want to spend less time on him, and instead focus on Brandi's job in itself, with Nigel more in the background. Good job; keep writing.


over 5 years ago Emily Swiers said:

Reminds me of The Devil Wears Prada! Loved it, felt really bad for Brandi.

Great job, good luck with the contest.



over 3 years ago Linn Pena said:

This was wonderful with an unexpected ending to it. I loved the uniqueness of your story. ^_^

over 5 years ago Emi said:

This reminds me a bit of what happened with a character called 'Red' in the tv show 'Once Upon A Time'. It was well written and I loved the ending, but the dialogue between the girl and her grandmother at the beginning was a little rushed. Also, I felt like you could have foreshadowed what was about to happen by going into more detail about the Incident. Overall a nice eerie story; I can imagine it being told around a campfire. Keep writing!