Supernatural Summer

Supernatural Summer

2 chapters / 519 words

Approximately 3 minutes to read

Description:

©2012 Summer Reading Contest Finalist! Aria has to spend the summer at her grandma's, but a horrible memory on a summer night ruins it all...

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Comments(266)

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over 5 years ago Lw said:

This feels so great to read and I love what you done with the opening

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over 5 years ago Kyla Marie Rich said:

Wow. That was creepy and well written. Nice work! ~Kyla Marie RIch : )

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over 5 years ago Colin Lierman said:

...wow. That's all I have to say. It was quite an eerie piece (which is the kind I like!) and nicely written. Altogether, I enjoyed this piece! :)

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over 5 years ago Mary Nichols said:

Congrats on being a finalist and good luck!

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over 5 years ago The Great Toepick said:

I saw TWO mistakes. AWESOME!!

1. She laughed the fakest laugh I had ever heard, and *once* I saw Nigel, I joined in.

2. "You've got a fire in kid." that should be "You've got a fire in you kid' or something like that.

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over 5 years ago Linda D said:

Great story and voice. Only one small confusion: She laughed the fakest laugh I had ever heard, and one I saw Nigel, I joined in. Without the commas, I had to read that a few times to understand it. Good luck