Supernatural Summer

Supernatural Summer

2 chapters / 519 words

Approximately 3 minutes to read

Description:

©2012 Summer Reading Contest Finalist! Aria has to spend the summer at her grandma's, but a horrible memory on a summer night ruins it all...

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over 5 years ago Lw said:

This feels so great to read and I love what you done with the opening

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over 5 years ago Kyla Marie Rich said:

Wow. That was creepy and well written. Nice work! ~Kyla Marie RIch : )

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over 5 years ago Colin Lierman said:

...wow. That's all I have to say. It was quite an eerie piece (which is the kind I like!) and nicely written. Altogether, I enjoyed this piece! :)

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over 5 years ago Mary Nichols said:

Congrats on being a finalist and good luck!

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over 5 years ago K.Leah Lotus (*~Kim~*) said:

I love the alliteration in the title lol :) And yeah , it also reminded me of Devil Wears Prada.I liked it! You made me hate her boss and I was happy she told her off at the end :)

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over 5 years ago Saundra Elaine said:

Just one thing. Where you wrote,"they suggested they want to suck my soul out." "Suggested" is in past tense like the rest of the story, but "want" is in present tense. Fix that, and you'll have a flawless story. ^.^ Good luck with the contest!