Supernatural Summer

Supernatural Summer

2 chapters / 519 words

Approximately 3 minutes to read

Description:

©2012 Summer Reading Contest Finalist! Aria has to spend the summer at her grandma's, but a horrible memory on a summer night ruins it all...

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Comments(266)

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over 5 years ago Lw said:

This feels so great to read and I love what you done with the opening

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over 5 years ago Kyla Marie Rich said:

Wow. That was creepy and well written. Nice work! ~Kyla Marie RIch : )

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over 5 years ago Colin Lierman said:

...wow. That's all I have to say. It was quite an eerie piece (which is the kind I like!) and nicely written. Altogether, I enjoyed this piece! :)

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over 5 years ago Mary Nichols said:

Congrats on being a finalist and good luck!

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over 5 years ago You'll never guess my username said:

This was fantastic. I liked your imagery, especially of outside, and your plot was really good. You were really mysterious with your mention of the yellow eyes in the beggining-that was giood. i also liked your mention of Aria's na,me while she was outside. you could add more about the character's animal instincts to kill but i know you have a word limit.

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over 5 years ago Jessiminnie said:

Great story. I'd have liked to see more description, but I realize the limits of only 500 words. Otherwise, GREAT JOB!! I really liked it. I'd like to possibly see this expanded and added to once the contest is over, like maybe going into the first attack. But I know how annoying adding to a story is sometimes. :) Your grammer was basically flawless. I hate when people just have an utter disregard for grammer. I understand a few typos but some of the things I've read on Figment have just been awful grammer-wise, so I do love how flawless yours was. Haha. Oh dear. I just spent 3 sentences talking about grammer. Oops. Haha. :) Excellent work!! Good luck!!