Roach

Roach

12 chapters / 9118 words

Approximately about 1 hour to read

Description:

Thanks to Lauren Michelle for the amazing cover!

A young thief must risk life and limb to save a princess he just met and a land he has never known. Rhaegal, known as Roach, must escape a dangerous city where everyone is after him.

Comments(15)

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about 4 years ago Em Midday said:

GORGEOUS COVER XD

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over 4 years ago Aan-Michel Inkruma said:

I'm going to take a wild guess that you've read Game of Thrones? Anyway, interesting story- you use all the hallmarks of good fantasy (but more on that in a review after reading!)

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almost 5 years ago Ryann Ravenwood said:

This...was....a....ma....zing!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I loved it so much, I just broke my composure!

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almost 6 years ago Ratcliff said:

I'm really liking this, certainly something i will keep up with. There are only a few silly grammatical errors that you could pick up on easy, and i think it would serve it well to read through and edit it properly, because it deserves to be the best. If you wanted, I would be more than happy to edit it for you.

Reviews(3)

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about 4 years ago Em Midday said:

D:

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D: D: D: D:

Besides that, you have a serious grammatical issue; it's called: you're supposed to use a comma inside quotation marks when someone speaks. You're using periods :p Also, un-capitalize the "she said" "he said" after quotation marks. It's a huge pet-peeve because all my friends do it. ALL OF THEM.

Otherwise... D:

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about 4 years ago Em Midday said:

Public execution say whaaaaaat??? :O Yay for Trevor!! You know I had to reread the last chapter cause I FORGOT since you took FOR FREAKING EVER to get a new chapter up :p Anyway... Keep writing this goddangit!