Tainted Mystery

Tainted Mystery

1 chapter / 557 words

Approximately 3 minutes to read

Description:

You never know when you'll take your last breath. For the Summer Reading Contest. *Goal 200 hearts* (Do I hear 250? ;D)

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almost 4 years ago Lu Yunong said:

Hello this Lu and I would love to turn this into a graphic novel! Also even though this story is a year old it isn't too bad. A bit on the over used side, but it is a year old.

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over 5 years ago Mary Bowker said:

Grandma's very proud of you sweetie

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over 5 years ago Jada said:

Wow ... how heart-wrenching.

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over 5 years ago Beautiful Disaster ♫ said:

I loved it I'm happy you asked me to read this.. It got my attention quickly

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over 5 years ago . said:

Hi, sorry it took me so long to respond. So your piece is very dark, but not in a bad way. I see you went with the whole vampire thing, which can be overdone sometimes. You really just have to be careful not to be really cliche with certain things. I thought it was a little water downed then what it could be. If you're going to go edgy and dark you have to really go all out. I think you have the ability to really take this piece to the next level. Other than that I thought it was interesting you got a lot of story in little space which is a talent not a lot of writers have. If you still want to swap you can read anything of mine, I don't mind. Happy Writing!

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over 5 years ago Brooke Heather said:

Wow this was really sad! But also really good. It was emotional and really thought out. I really felt bad for her. It was a spin on the normally "glorified" way of being a vampire. Good job!