Tainted Mystery

Tainted Mystery

1 chapter / 557 words

Approximately 3 minutes to read


You never know when you'll take your last breath. For the Summer Reading Contest. *Goal 200 hearts* (Do I hear 250? ;D)

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almost 4 years ago Lu Yunong said:

Hello this Lu and I would love to turn this into a graphic novel! Also even though this story is a year old it isn't too bad. A bit on the over used side, but it is a year old.


about 5 years ago Mary Bowker said:

Grandma's very proud of you sweetie


over 5 years ago Jada said:

Wow ... how heart-wrenching.

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over 5 years ago Beautiful Disaster ♫ said:

I loved it I'm happy you asked me to read this.. It got my attention quickly



over 5 years ago George said:

As someone who's not the biggest fan of gore and vampires, I presumed this wouldn't be my cup of tea. But! You took the writing in your stride perfectly, it had good potential (perhaps for more?), and it showed your potential as a writer as well. The beginning and the end are a bit shaky, but all in all promising horror fiction, and it was legitimately chilling (although I do tend to gross out very easily).


over 5 years ago Olivily Moony Maleckas said:

This was amazing, the detail at some points were a bit sketchy at points but you made it up :) It had me hooked right at the beginning. You have a wonderful talent