Tainted Mystery

Tainted Mystery

1 chapter / 557 words

Approximately 3 minutes to read

Description:

You never know when you'll take your last breath. For the Summer Reading Contest. *Goal 200 hearts* (Do I hear 250? ;D)

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almost 4 years ago Lu Yunong said:

Hello this Lu and I would love to turn this into a graphic novel! Also even though this story is a year old it isn't too bad. A bit on the over used side, but it is a year old.

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over 5 years ago Mary Bowker said:

Grandma's very proud of you sweetie

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over 5 years ago Jada said:

Wow ... how heart-wrenching.

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over 5 years ago Beautiful Disaster ♫ said:

I loved it I'm happy you asked me to read this.. It got my attention quickly

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over 5 years ago Randeletta Howson said:

SWAP- Wow. I think this is a amazing short story :) I loved how you pulled me into the story and captured my emotions. You're fab writer and I think we could be amazing beginning of a novel. It is flawless & magical :D Can I just say I love your cover as well :)

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over 5 years ago Falathiel Nest Mahrokh said:

Wow, what a good story! No grammatical difficulties. This story just immersed me in the plot lines and the characters. I could see everything very clearly, her hunger and her feelings were all very powerful and detailed. Very powerful. Very well written, breathtaking. Thank you so much for asking me to read it!