Interesting, I'd love to see more collaborations between you guys. This story is reminiscent to me in the way the crow behaves in the beginning. There were a few grammatical errors but to me personally it doesn't matter. It would just make it more appealing to those kinda people who are obsessed with grammar. Over all it's good. 4/5
Comments(8)
6 months ago Hannah Wallace said:
omg featured story
6 months ago invisible hope said:
we're famous you hear me famous
6 months ago Caly Emily Cadence said:
Oh my gosh I can't believe this is a featured story XD Same as Jazmine..completely forgot about this until I saw it on the front page.
6 months ago jaz said:
The sad part is I forgot about this collab. 0_0 and, like, every other one. We have to do this again.
Reviews(2)
11 months ago Hazel Pearlman said:
Very dark, a few more commas here and there, but amazing! Keep writing!
11 months ago Victus Letum said:
Interesting, I'd love to see more collaborations between you guys. This story is reminiscent to me in the way the crow behaves in the beginning. There were a few grammatical errors but to me personally it doesn't matter. It would just make it more appealing to those kinda people who are obsessed with grammar. Over all it's good. 4/5