Song of Death

Song of Death

21 chapters / 70244 words

Approximately about 6 hours to read

Description:

PLEASE EXCUSE THE PROLOUGE! IT NEEDS TO BE REWRITTEN SO YOU MAY SKIP IT IF YOU LIKE
Set in the kingdom Ulterïa, the resident faeries are facing the threat of total ethnocide. A unexpected group of outcasts are to be the saviors of the race. This novel may end up as a series of novels.

Genres:

Writing, Fantasy, Novel

Comments(8)

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over 5 years ago Jenna Rayman said:

Well written! I loved every second of this piece. Your descriptions are great!

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over 5 years ago sita llih said:

I havent read the whole thing yet but I will when I have time. This was really good! I haven't read anything like it and the way you describe things really paints a picture.

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over 5 years ago Anna Browne said:

Cute!

I think this is unique. I like the way you have written it; it's not only interesting, but you tell it in a way that reminds me of something by Hans Christian Anderson. Intriguing, fun, and overall a great read.

-Annabella

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over 5 years ago Kathy Shanahan said:

I can already tell that this is going to be a different (in a good way) story. I'm not sure what you could name this, maybe "Deaths to a Kingdom"? I'm not quite sure. But anyways, good job so far.

Reviews(1)

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over 5 years ago Emily Skrutskie said:

Your style is really great for this sort of writing! However, you need to fix your punctuation around dialogue tags. Right now you have stuff like "'This.' He said," where you ought to punctuate it as "'This,' he said." My major concern is that you open with a worldbuilding info dump, which is sort of a peeve of mine. Story is tied to character, and when we're introduced to a world without having a character to relate to, it can distance your reader from the material. I would recommend starting with your characters, and working in the worldbuilding and history as you go along. Overall, though, this is really solid work, and I wish you the best of luck in continuing this!